You may have heard of blueberries, strawberries, and other berries. Today I want to introduce you to a new species, the simpleberry. While photographing the park around the Sacramento, CA state capitol this past December, I went through a process I often experience when I come across an appealing scene. My first and most natural inclination is to include everything. I tried resisting that urge and focus instead on a very tiny portion of what lay before me, but I still came with this rather busy composition.
Yes, it’s a closeup, achieved with the maximum focal length of my 16-85 lens on my D300 camera, and yes, it features a nice combination of colors and in vs. out of focus elements. Yet it still suffers what I call the “everything-and-the-kitchen-sink” problem. Fortunately I was thinking through this and did what I’ve now learned to do in similar situations. I asked, “what is this shot about?” And “what do I really want to show here?” So I switched cameras to my D700, and using the very shallow DOF my 85mm f1.4D lens enables, I tried simplifying further.
Still, the result is a bit too complex. Even using my “draw a diagonal” across the frame” trick didn’t quite hit the mark.
A few minutes earlier I had taken this simpler shot (blown highlights and all), but it didn’t really come across to me as strong due to the busier background.
Maybe if I tried something similar now, keeping my eye on a more even background while simplifying the foreground subject…
And voila!, I found my simpleberries.